15 years ago
Thursday, April 8, 2010
Thesis Statement
Steroid abuse is an unfortunate and growing problem in the United States that must be eliminated. Although there is not a simple solution to the crisis, an increase in steroid education, testing, and severe punishments, will help diminish the current problem and also decrease the likelihood that potential users will begin to use steroids.
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Very well put position and solution. You cover many areas in how the problem can be improved upon.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Connie, it's a very clear opinion, and clear solution.
ReplyDeleteI agree punishment is a great tool to use to stop problems
ReplyDeleteSimple, short, sweet to the point first sentence, and your solution and 2nd sentence is very clear and how it should be solved. Also I feel you can write a very strong paper with the solutions you provide and the topic you chose.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great topic. Not many people are for using steroids, but on the flip side, there apparently are many benefits which makes it controversial. The solution is also well-worded. Well done.
ReplyDeleteStrong thesis statment! You have a clear solution to your problem that will definilty work. I agree that steriod use needs to be elimanted in sports leagues. I dont know why a person would consider using and illeagal substance that could ruin their sports career.
ReplyDeleteI think youu can find alot of stuff on this subject, because even atheletes have been found to use steroids and they have influences on many people.
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